tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4014461870405318477.post4074333063979926417..comments2023-02-22T10:44:50.456-06:00Comments on mudjob: Brian Michael BarbeitoMDJBhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17793388758122524855noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4014461870405318477.post-40447188482414984872012-03-09T00:29:13.180-06:002012-03-09T00:29:13.180-06:00You caught me at 'beautiful type of black that...You caught me at 'beautiful type of black that sort of glistened' and I read the rest with much enjoyment, soaking up the atmosphere that you created.Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4014461870405318477.post-64234854418105900082012-03-05T17:15:01.951-06:002012-03-05T17:15:01.951-06:00Brian, your stuff is always so original and fresh....Brian, your stuff is always so original and fresh. It's always a great pleasure to read you. I liked the use of bullets for the dialogue. Great idea, especially in flash fiction. And the two voices were, this sounds so cliche, but they were pitch perfect, man. Really, really well done.Bill Laphamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16324479035847902852noreply@blogger.com