tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4014461870405318477.post2543043268409245429..comments2023-02-22T10:44:50.456-06:00Comments on mudjob: Guest Writer: Fiona MarionMDJBhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17793388758122524855noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4014461870405318477.post-16192161103700174242011-03-04T13:53:57.668-06:002011-03-04T13:53:57.668-06:00There are so many quotable phrases here that I'...There are so many quotable phrases here that I'm not even going to make an attempt at my favorite. This is an excellent story and a very smooth read.Elliott Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265310433197094358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4014461870405318477.post-13810211132205448492011-03-04T11:32:10.695-06:002011-03-04T11:32:10.695-06:00This was a unique story. I thoroughly enjoyed read...This was a unique story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.Christin Moweryhttp://christinmowery.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4014461870405318477.post-41412174098125432492011-03-03T07:59:07.337-06:002011-03-03T07:59:07.337-06:00Fiona, that was a fine exploration of boundaries, ...Fiona, that was a fine exploration of boundaries, and the inability to recognize and respect them. I think you have written a practical definition of mental illness here. I liked the way the story gradually gained momentum, and then collapsed meekly at the end. You used a number of interesting descriptive phrases, as well. Good theme, fine writing.Grey Johnsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4014461870405318477.post-61954617238512689442011-03-03T02:39:15.509-06:002011-03-03T02:39:15.509-06:00Golly - what an original, uncomfortable individual...Golly - what an original, uncomfortable individual! Almost brought <i>me</i> out into a 'rash of mistrust' (loved that phrase!)Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.com