Wednesday, March 2, 2011

Guest Writer: Fiona Marion

Norma

This story removed by author-s request.


4 comments:

  1. Golly - what an original, uncomfortable individual! Almost brought me out into a 'rash of mistrust' (loved that phrase!)

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  2. Fiona, that was a fine exploration of boundaries, and the inability to recognize and respect them. I think you have written a practical definition of mental illness here. I liked the way the story gradually gained momentum, and then collapsed meekly at the end. You used a number of interesting descriptive phrases, as well. Good theme, fine writing.

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  3. This was a unique story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

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  4. There are so many quotable phrases here that I'm not even going to make an attempt at my favorite. This is an excellent story and a very smooth read.

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